Why not use proper grammar? If you know how to write in proper English, then why not? It's easier for others to read and understand what someone is trying to convey. Plus, you don't come across as uneducated. I tend to give more credibility towards those who can put a simple sentence together and can tell the difference between their, there, they're and our, are, etc.
As far as the Desolation, I agree with others that it has fallen far from what it was in the late 90's and early 2000's. I hunted there every year during archery season until 2010 and my family still does. All hunting is done on foot but is near a lot of roads (parts of that unit you can't go a half mile without running into one). Every season we use to see some great mule deer and now it's mostly does and forked horns.